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A Visit With the Mistress

The fee for my service does not come cheap,
you know you are bound to my intentions.
Be quiet you worm, lest I hear a peep.
You pleasure in things that no one mentions.

How dare you gaze at my tight leather skirt?
One crack of my whip and you lick my boots,
you know I have ways that will make you hurt;
total submission with no substitutes.

So drop to your knees I want you to cry
and murmur a sigh feigning your pleasure.
You know I have ways to make you comply
I’ll teach you manners beyond all measure.

I hear your sigh as you lend me your cheek,
bring me your paycheck, I'll see you next week.

 

 

 

 

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  • awannabepoet
    July 27
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    Well who knew such delicacies cames in counts of ten syllables...

    Very well penned Amera, as usual a nice little treat.


    • Amera gold member
      July 27
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      Thank you for the comment. I'm sorry I can't rate it anymore and only the computer can


      • awannabepoet
        July 27
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        Its all good you know, I am still not sure why they made the change, perhaps points were becoming to easy to come by.

        But I see it hard to accept to pay 50 points for a click on the featured list now, when you think of it like 1000 points is what 20$ or something like...

        And most people dont even bother to comment...LOL

        Anyways I love coming around and reading your stuff, I did give a sonnet another try this time I chose the Italian format.

        I hope it works.


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    February 10, 2008

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    whoowee~

    Boy it's chilly here in Ky...
    But after reading this I think the temps went up about 60 degrees....
    Awesome penning here sweetie...
    Best of luck in the contest...
    I think I will light up my cig now
    Hugs
    Susan~~~

  • Cinnarry gold member
    January 28, 2008
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    Delicious


  • Galaxy2
    January 25, 2008

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    What a charming piece...!
    You're an amazing teacher, cutie!
    Be my teacher...
    Teach me manners....

    I wish you could be my real teacher, sweetie...
    You're so impressive as a poetess ...
    Lots of kisses!

    Galaxy2


  • Tam
    January 21, 2008

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    hmmm...

    will you take VISA?
    or AmEx?
    pleeeeaaaasssseeeeeee??????
    you are buring up the AP pages...and poets...with stunning ink!!!
    I'm going to smoke a cig...LOLOL!
    Blessings! Tammy


  • penman gold member
    January 20, 2008
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    Whew!

    Oh my this was too much. Where is the deposit slip?


  • ellipsist
    January 20, 2008

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  • Whoochi gold member
    January 19, 2008
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    wooohoooo, check is in the mail DOLLFACE......love U!!!!!!!


  • j-cole
    January 18, 2008
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    my dream girl.......


  • PerVirtuous
    January 18, 2008

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    I know this side of you well... and that is all Forrest will say about that. This is a fascinating study of will and sexuality, yet stated so elegantly that it is not "dirty", even while it describes what is truly "kinky". Only you could do this with such finesse and grace. Bravo.


  • BellaD
    January 18, 2008

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    Wow!

    Here's a new side of your poetry. A dark sonnet. I like it.
    How dare you gaze at my tight leather skirt?
    One crack of my whip and you lick my boots,
    you know I have ways that will make you hurt.
    Total submission with no substitutes.

    Oooh! You're scaring me now! Have you been hanging around with Lady Dementia?

  • Mark7even
    January 18, 2008

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    Very Good

    Well written, harsh as is the reality of the trade.
    You should have three applauds but it wont let me change it. My mistake for hitting the wrong button.


  • bedovich
    January 18, 2008

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    ohhhh princess sis this is nice erotica sonnet your title is so sweeeet and the dark side of it is of great flavor good lucks hun


  • cricketjeff gold member
    January 18, 2008

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    I really love to see formal poetry used informally, some forms are hard to mould to anything outside there normal field but clearly a sonnet can do a lot more than is usual!
    Stupendous
    (And worrying what a poet has to do to earn a crust these days!)


  • micol
    January 18, 2008

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    This is moving toward the ambiguity of Shakespeare's Dark Lady--desireable, tempestuous, to be despised, to be loved/lusted after. It doesn't hurt that your speaker is herself a "Dark Lady" dressed in black.

    Question: Do you want "manors" (real estate) or "manners"?

    • Amera gold member
      January 18, 2008
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      Thanks, I saw that and fixed it already.


  • Kelli Marie
    January 18, 2008

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    Tame him baby....make him bow down to your superiority! lol For the contest...tastefully done and fun, at least for me. mnors, manners?? A great write.
    Kelli

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