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Little White Men

Little white men all in a row,
Shaking all over from top to toe,
Here comes the brush to scrub them clean,
With a buzz and whirl, oh how mean,
With toothpaste white, ready to fight,
The plaque and decay,
To make them stay,
So healthy and bright and white.

Little white men all in a row,
Shaking all over from top to toe,
Washed in blue,
A curious hue,
Minty and cool, like a swimming pool,
Gargle and spit,
You’ve got to admit,
They’re shiny and bright and cool.

Little white men all in a row,
Clean all over from top to toe,
The toothbrush goes back,
The mouthwash is capped,
There they sit, happy and fit,
In beds of pink,
See how they wink,
Little white men, all in a row
Clean all over from top to toe.

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    January 28, 2008

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    Quirky and innocent; I agree that this is great for children

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  • Elisabeth silver member
    January 19, 2008

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    What a good poem for children and you've written it so well. Quite charming. I don't see any awkward bits. I enjoyed reading this.
    Thanks,
    Lis