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A "FORM-al " Declaration for RIFTKIN

Blessed  are the
generous for they
are the one's who
show by their way
the biggest heart
of compassion and
caring so needed.

And
Blessed
Are those
who move all
to be their best
and to live life to
it's fullest potential
for they have such
positive a impact
upon so many
needing the
nurture
shown
so.

We here at AP
Acknowledging
and honoring
Contributions
made for many
by this great
Lady of verse
inspiring all
by words and
deeds so incredible
that so few if any
have now come close
to being the Blessing
that's ours in RIFTKIN.

Author notes

Thank You, Dear RIFTKIN for your great contributions to help make this place what it is, and for all the Point Donors to make this an incredible Celebration and Event in her Honor!
Thank you, Roaddog Wolf, for initiating, and conducting this Worthy Honor-fest, acknowledging Her tremendous contribution to this place.
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Photo borrowed from RIFTKIN'S OWN HOME PAGE.

A contest entry

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Comments

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  • Roaddog Wolf
    January 20, 2008

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    Very nicely done

    Like how you have shaped your words into the form you have.
    "Blessed are the
    generous for they
    are the one's who
    show by their way
    the biggest heart
    of compassion and
    caring so needed." very well said and your welcome, it is my pleasure to have opened this contest for Riftkin. Thanks for your entry and good luck in the contest.

    xxx


  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    January 19, 2008

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    Beautiful

    As always you have opened up your big heart and expressed yourself in such a way to a strange rof a poet what AP is all about and I really love this alot. any ways this is just a very well penned and well done poem and I love this poem;. when you show off your soft side and express yourself from the heart you get the tear works going. she's lucky to have read such a wonderful poem and I am impressed the poet got so amny points. anyw ays keep writing and even though you already been rewarded with her commentgood luck in the contest any ways


  • Riftkin gold member
    January 18, 2008

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    This lady of verse
    wishes to say
    thank you dear poet
    for making my day.

    words and form
    you have pen
    I will admit
    they made me grin

    for this is
    a touching poem
    from you to me
    thank you again

    Riftkin


    • MassMan
      January 18, 2008
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      Thank you, Classy Lady--
      That is one awesome reply.

      I am glad you liked it--I am glad I could honor you for your wonderful efforts and energies, as well as point spent so freely here at AP.

      Bless You Dear Honored Lady,
      David :0


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    January 18, 2008

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    Very nice Tribute to Riftkin, Love the Shape of this Great use of alliteration too. Good luck in the contest

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