Junk food
Hamburgers, fries
To belly a surprize
Making it grow to mammoth size
Smiling.
In a list
A contest entry
- Junk food by pop123.
450 points, ended February 1, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Unrhymed Form Poetry by Metaphorist.
600 points, ended April 23, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Junk Poetry. by girl shaman.
5500 points, ended November 16, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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um well im not too familiar with form poetry but.. i guess this was pretty cool? i don't exactly know how to comment this but thanks for sharing.
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Haha. Very nice. Thanks for entering and good luck!
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Fantastic poem!Keep up the good work!Thanks for entering my contest.
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Great cinquain to read an hour before lunch, I'll have a super-size, please! Good luck in the contest with this delightful mouthful!
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A nice piece, smooth flow to it. Good luck in the contest with it
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