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Thanks For All You Give

Woman of Nature,
Femme of the night,
You reach out with every penned insight,
You have given hope to all who you have stumbled upon,
Everything you have written is all from your heart,
You are so wonderful,
With a heart as big as yours,
With so much love and pretty smiles,
You put the sun in the darkest days,
You give us flowing words,
Like God gives the stars to the dark and empty sky,
People like you make people like me smile,
So selfless and honest,
A poet of many words,
Every one has superlative meaning,
Not a day goes by,
When you don't something wonderful,
For others, never for yourself,
You're the kind of person,
Everyone wants as a friend, a sister,
This dedication is straight from my heart,
It's people like you that make this world shine,

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Riftkin you're wonderful and this poem is dedicated entirely to you

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  • Roaddog Wolf
    January 20, 2008

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    I'm sure that Riftkin will

    appreciate your kind words. You said it all with your last line,"It's people like you that make this world shine" very nice thanks for entering and good luck in the contest


  • Riftkin gold member
    January 18, 2008

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    blessed poet I am touched
    for my words flow from my heart
    in all the contests and poems I write
    just to know that others like them too
    is all that one poet like me could ever do

    thank you for this poem from you
    as it is filled with your heart in
    each and every word.

    Riftkin