Not just another [chip] off the old block,
This time my heart really [melted]
Between heated [chocolate] arguments,
And drippy [fudge] tears.
He packed his [caloric] bags one by one,
This must be it for us,
Breaking away... [chewing apart]
Like a New Years Resolution.
My [Sweetie] is gone; or so it seems,
No more delicious [lollipop] kisses,
No more warm [gummy bear] hugs.
But I guess that's just the way [the cookie crumbles]...
Author notes
This is kind of weird, but whatever.
A contest entry
- Junk food by pop123.
450 points, ended February 1, 2008, 14 entries
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Comments
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I am on a diet, and now you have me wanting a cookie (preferrably of the chocolate chip kind)
Great write, thank you for sharing your favorite with me. Best of luck in the contest.
♥
whisper
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It's a tad weird, but I like the tasty additions to this already powerful poem.
Well done!
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This is kinda weird..but I kinda like it..but whatever.
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good job
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This poem is great, (yummy)
in every line, (kisses)
it is wonderful (chocolate bliss)
all the best in the contest! (homemade fudge made with love)
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Super poem.Thanks for entering the contest!
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you never cease to let down with your creativity!
love love LOVED it
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