I seem to be in my own world.
I feel so an unwanted
my emotions dead and swirled.
I feel left like an house that's haunted.
I was once a place of refuge
now I'm just an isolation.
this is the life I once refused
a life of rejection.
loneliness in dictionary never existed.
but now its seem to be well know
I wish the word never existed
I wish to me its was unknown.
Wishes don't always come true
so here I am alone
living no live but a clues
with true friends gone
I'm just like a sinked stone.
Is this my life?
cause its not my dreams,
no! its just my loneliness.
A contest entry
- The opposite of your usual style of poetry by Loveandblessings2u.
950 points, ended January 25, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Coping with Being Alone by zappa.
900 points, ended January 19, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is so sad, makes one want to cry.
Very emotion, full of pain.
It has an amazing flow to it.
This piece is well written, with a great flow,
I really enjoyed it a lot.
Loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
Good Luck ~~~
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The Grammer is a little rough. I apologize for being so critical, but it's the English-Lit Teacher I use to profess that hits home.
Aside from this, your poem is smooth as silk. I feel the pain, and that's what I am looking for in this contest. Please dear poet -please keep writing.
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yea i understand that..just to let u know that English is not my language sad it been only 4 years i have learned English..its not am excuse..but just thought id let you know that i appreciate the fact that u took your time to read my poem..
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This is a good write.
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thanks for ur comment.
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