"Goodness shes gorgeous.
Do you know her?"
"Thats my best friend.
Compared; i flaw her."
Her brown, straight hair;
Flowing perfectly through the wind.
"I wish i had curly hair."
('I think you are blind')
My eyes retrace her steps,
While i follow her; slow.
G-d i wish i had legs like that,
And a face that would glow.
"Wow, shes so hot.
What is her name?"
"Julia; i know she is stunning."
Maybe i could have some fame?
Her black eyes are unique,
But sometimes they scare.
I look up to her,
My hero; i care.
I smile at her outfits,
Dreaming they were mine.
Her figure fits them just right,
It's striking. "It's fine."
At least we're best friends.
I can tell people we are.
They look at me with awe.
Wishing they were.
Author notes
For Julz. I love you bestie.
A contest entry
- experience by transit.
575 points, ended January 19, 2008, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Friendships (contest) by misticmoonlite.
575 points, ended January 21, 2008, 15 entries
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Comments
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Friends are the best, great relationship and admiration of her,thank you for this entry, good luck..MM
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wow!
This poem is so sweet and it had me imagining my best friend. As I kept reading one, it seemed like you peered into my life and wrote from my perspective.
Everything here is acurate and though I do feel she is prettier than me, we are still best friends and that message in this poem is simply beautiful! what a lovely poem. best of wishes in the contest!
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Kinda saddens me because it reminds me of me and my BFF growing up, always sucks living in the shadow of someone else, though you do it anyway cause you love em.
well done! loved it
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