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Teenage Love Affair

So she's a little hottie,
And she's got a great body,
I love it when she smiles,
And her eyes drive me wild,
She's got a man,
But she dont understand,
He likes her for her *****,
But she makes me feel mushy,
So I met her at a party,
And he wasnt there,
So we went outside to play truth or dare,
I knew she needed love,
Not someone looking for a glove,
She said she love me too,
Yea I know what I can do,
I see her later on,
her boyfreind by her side,
So I pull her to my hide,
She backs up and says what the ****,
Talking to my freinds later on that night,
Come to find out me and her got in fight,
And I was so wasted,
My HANDS got pasted.



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  • bloved
    January 18, 2008
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    hahahaha

    this was pretty damn good girl...am awesome spin from the song...quite original. I didn't expect this...its way better

    My favorite line is

    Talking to my freinds later on that night,
    Come to find out me and her got in fight,
    And I was so wasted,
    My HANDS got pasted.

    haha a great way to end this poem