You are my life, my profession,
but you don't know me.
You are my love, my obsession,
I yearn for you endlessly.
I watch you leave for school.
You are so young and so pretty,
Your tired looks make me drool.
I follow as you drive thru the city.
When you get there, I'm there too,
You are daydreaming in your classes,
As I imagine what I'm going to do.
Your beauty reflecting in my glasses.
At lunch you savor a fizzy soda pop,
I have the panties you wore yesterday.
how delicious you are in that tank top.
I taste chewed pencils from your essay.
It's afternoon. You're getting restless.
I stare at you as you fidget in your chair.
Your sweet dimples I must caress.
You'll leave at the bell. I know where.
It was here I first saw that gleam.
You came here to enjoy ice cream.
It was in your eyes, thats how i knew,
This mall is where I first saw you.
You wear such a teeny little skirt.
Your parents told you "its too obscene",
I love to watch the way you flirt.
I also read the same seventeen.
When you get home tired, you wonder,
Where have your parents gone?
Its raining hard and you hear thunder.
So close now I feel your yawn.
You are in your room, relaxed with hope.
Your so cute now and I'm so attracted.
As you lay in your bed you see the rope.
I put it there, to possess you undistracted.
You see me now standing over you.
Now you're bound and ask what I will do.
I planned this encounter and I know.
All I really want to do is say hello.
Author notes
Give me the 800 point reward or else you don't get those panties back.
Written November 11th, 2003
A contest entry
- Stalkers by CountlessSpade.
800 points, ended November 29, 2003, 30 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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awesome
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excellent! i really enjoyed it! keep writing, i love your style!!! OHLALA! please comment on soem of mine! thanx a lot!
luv ya lotz! *xoxo* ~qtpa2t1224~
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WOW! It definally was a grat stalker poem a bit frightening but GREAT. Keep up the aweaome work!!! XOXO ~teary
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Wooooww... this is good. Really different.. yet if i was that girl I'd be very afraid -lol.. you described it all brilliantly- well done!
Shadow -
Thats excellent - kind of sinister!
For a lighter look at stalking take a swizz at Woodworm's great poem on this subject :
http://allpoetry.com/Poem/334345
Thanks for sharing mate.
Good read.
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wow this is amazing its so scary till the end then u do a sigh of relief absolutely took my breath away
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Wohoo! Second place out of more than 40... I should write more contest poems.
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How....mysteriously, sickly, romantic...sort of. Great job, nice that ya love me so much! haha j/p great write, very freaky!
**CountlessSpade
Edited on Nov 29, 7:43 p.m. because ''. -
I actually really like this stalker poem
felt personal , creepy, kinda hot to be truthful
creepy cause it reminded me of u and me
reminds me way too much of u
meant to be that personal or am i reading this too much
sounds like theres a message for me that only id pick up
parts that are real like ending in a metaphorical way
I like this poem more each time I read it.
it really freeks me out in a kinky lonesome reminding way
I like the new bg more Soulda only used one girl in a leather skirt, the stalkee
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This is great! I love these creepy, psycho poems. Er....what else to say? I love the ending, but I don't know which way to take it. Is he really just literally saying "Hello" or a sick, twisted kind of hello?
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I am not sure quite what to say about this poem. Its cute yet sickeningly sticking to the contest topic. Wouldn't expect anything less from you. Nice use of this bg again!
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