A
caterpillar \ /
thats discharged o
from her cocoon, (( | ))
becomes a butterfly ( )
full in bloom.
She spreads
her wings
li ke
petals
in the sun, sh owing off
her new found
beauty
to
all.Her
cat erpil lar
friends are jealous
inde ed, wi shing
that
they too
had \/
@ beautiful@ O OO @
\|/ wings. \|/ OOO OO \|/
She tells them all but you'll get your wings,
as soon as you eat some more weeds. If you want to have beautiful wings just like me, you better start
eating those flowers at your feet.
Author notes
http://www.angelfire.com/art2/sndrad67/buflytubes/index.html
author Sandra dee Psp tubes butterflies/ grass
caterpillars came from google i can't find it now didn't have a name on it was titled fourcaterpillars though
My own creation using tubes and paint
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A contest entry
- BLOW MY MIND! with Shape Poetry by Tam.
900 points, ended January 31, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Design a Background for One of Your Poems by Freed by Mercy.
1350 points, ended April 14, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Oh, I love those butterflies! The shape poetry goes perfectly with your BG and your BG goes perfectly with the poem. Simply mind blowing, dear!
Beautiful!
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Very pretty! Great work on this. It is so fresh and springy feeling! Take a bow! Good luck in the contest.
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Nicely done here Cara. Love the butterfly border and how you tied everything together with your poem. Best of luck in the contest,
Evan
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I love butterflies, well done
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Very nicely done! The background you created is perfect for this poem. I especially like the grass, sky, and butterfly in the flower.
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