Under a thousand rose petals
scented with desire.
I await your tender touch.
Velvet softness
reminds me of
your eager fingers
exploring my soul.
Captured dew drops
drip onto my dry lips
conjuring images
of passions kiss.
Under a thousand rose petals
Scented with desire,
My naked skin blushes
crimson as the blooms.
Thoughts of you
Quicken my breath,
and petals dance.
But alas,
this blanket of nature
cannot embrace me,
like the beat
of your heart.
Author notes
I like In-Between the Lines of Love as a title for the ebook...
A contest entry
- Calling All Writers & Poets Alike....! by B Chandler.
1050 points, ended January 29, 2008, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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OK...so now I'm blushing!! A very passionate write, image inspiring as well. Well done.
Martin
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Lovely thoughts clearly went into composing this. I enjoyed reading and thank you for your entry.
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Very lovely poem, aww it's so sweet. I have one suggestion in the 5th line add the word "me" so it will be "reminds me of". Other than that I really like it. Thank you for entering and good luck.
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