I saw a sweet buttercup
As it fluttered by
It's warm breath touched my face
And calmed my beating heart
The Calmness of it's flapping wings
Be still my gentle heart
It gave me a tender kiss
And Chills ran down my spine
Magic is still alive,
And fantasies do come true
For you, for me, for all of us
I see those dream in you
Author notes
Not always good at symbolism, But I thought I would try. I miss you guys,
Please tell me what you think
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Well Charlie
at least you are trying to eenter every angle of poetry... there are many!I liked the tranquilllity in this poem, the personfication in the buttercup was lovely.
God bless
Dolores xx
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I think you did a fantastic job with the symbolism. This is very beautiful. Soft as a spring breeze full of fragrance of the flowers and a gentle as your heart. Full of messages of hope.
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this is just precious!!
It's warm breath touched my face....beautiful line!
a very very sweet write!!!
GBY
SilverButterfly
(Mary)
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Your poetry will be darker soon enough.
I liked this.
Very sweet, its almost unbearable but in a good way.
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This was very sweet. I thought the imagery was very nice as well. Hopeful piece with an endearing message!
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awwww thats so cute... its just vauge enough for the buttercup to be anything for anyone... wow... this is a good piece cause anyone can relate to it...
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