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Tainted Snow: # 3

Red against white
Life allied with winter
Hearts hang from snow covered branches
Beating waiting for love

She floats above the snow
Gracing the creatures surrounding
Her skin contrasts against her blood red gown
Giving an eerie glow to the air

Red eyes glare into space
He perches on a tree immobile
His white fur fades to snow with black piercing through
His prey hangs from trees bleeding against snow

Clutching her own heart
She takes in a breath of air blowing it towards the blood hearts
They beat unharmonously returning life to the air
Overtaken by life she stares away

the red and white overwhelming her

Author notes

oh this was the pic from option 3

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  • greatperhaps
    January 18, 2008

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    hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm interesting... very cool how you took the picture and thought of stuff! Good luck in the contest!


  • Rinoasis
    January 18, 2008
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    This poem describes the picture really well. Good job! Thanks for entering this! I liked it.

    Blessings,
    ~Moonchild


  • Rinoasis
    January 18, 2008

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    Please include which option this poem is about in your author notes, thanks. Otherwise I can't judge this.

    Blessings,
    ~Moonchild

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