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Just Born



Curious eyes,
Blinking.

A hesitant purr,
Relaxes.

My tiny kitten.

In a list

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think and PLEASE be honest

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  • J. Peoples
    January 23, 2008

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    Very Sweet

    I like brevity in poetry. This poem presents a very vivid image with very, very few words. Nice job!!


  • RainbowSecrets
    January 17, 2008
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    Congratulations on your Bronze trophy...your words were so full of new life.




  • Riftkin gold member
    January 17, 2008
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    This is sweet and love the personal touch Riftkin


  • Lady Australis silver member
    January 17, 2008
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    so cute


  • Riftkin gold member
    January 17, 2008
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    Prompt: Is the picture, 'tiny kitten'.

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