There are some things in life that take,
Other things may give.
Some things will stop your cousin's breath,
Others may let him live.
I talked to some things once or twice,
Nothing was said or done.
They came back to my life again,
And took the only one.
Other things were powerless,
Overworked and stressed.
She tried and tried but she's too old,
Bounded - she's suppressed.
And now my friend is dieing,
Blue eyes turn to white.
It was a cancer that tricked me,
Thinking he was alright.
A contest entry
- Sad Poems please :):) by LeilaJayne.
1400 points, ended January 23, 2008, 36 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Be brutaly honest.
Comments
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This is so sad, the last stanza hurt me so bad to read...
If you ever need to talk to someone I'm here, you probably won't but the offer's there...
Thanks for sharing this poem
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The big C is a mighty foe indeed... I'm sorry your friend is dying...
I can hear your sadness in this!
Thanks for entering! -
aww so sad it made me wanna cry well you sound like a sweet guy messege me please.
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