My holiest, greatest joy
is to sup between
The thighs of a virgin
drinking her menstrual flow,
Tasting her womb juices
womanly blood tributes,
Rancid lustful pourings
gifting my parched throat.
The temptation to bite
the tender warm wet lips
Is irresistible;
O God, the joy, the joy.
Author notes
To watch someone you love die is so exquisite, nothing can compare with it.
A contest entry
- Elizabeth Bathory by JustFallingApart.
300 points, ended July 31, 2008, 3 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
This is no fantasy, please believe me. I love to sup on blood.
Comments
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wow very sick and sexy
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mmm, an uncomfortable and twisted read. despite this not being my exact "up of tea" so to speak, it was rather enthralling and well written. i do wonder at the first line though:
"My holiest, greatest joy
in to sup between"
perhaps "in" was meant to be "is"? in any case a good read, i enjoyed it thank you.
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Thank you
I thank you for pointing out my typo. I was probably too excited at the time to notice it.
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This poem makes me nervous.
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The poem is well written. I wasn't expecting that, honestly. Menstrual blood is heralded throughout the world for having magical properties. I can see the appeal.
The comments here crack me up. I doubt any of them have actually participated in a blood letting. It's, uh, quite the experience.
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Wow! Fuckin fantastic, I loved this. Ohh just the idea of blood is turning me on!! lol. Excellent work altough a little perverted....I like perversion hehe
Countess Elizabeth Bathory=HEROINE/LEGEND
~Emily~ xx
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wow, this was discustingly wonderful. I realy liked this. You realy captured alot in this piece. I'm so glad you entered my contest, I can tell this one will turn out good
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Watching an adored one in pain can be exquisite, but going by my intuition about people like you, (which hasn't yet failed me) you've never seen anyone die. Nice try. Although I did get a good laugh. If you'd be yourself instead of trying to make people believe you're a vampyre, you'd quickly become one of my favourite poets.
Too bad, such a waste.
Although I will add applause because the mental image of you gaping at menstruation is just too funny.
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Not gaping, just drinking.
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I just have this image in my head of him laying on his back while a mentrating women stradles his head trying to land it in. hahaha, gold
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Lying not laying on my back. Menstruating not mentrating.
Apart from that, thank you.
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Overkill
Hahahaha, alright. I have to admit, I like this, it really tickled my funny bone. Very very well done, i don't know if you were trying to make me laugh but it sure did. Good work
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This is in no way what I am looking for especially from this option... so you can most definitley bet that this won't get too far in this contest.
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Great.
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Excuse me, but did you reserve your spot and recieve a definition, because, if not, I will have to DQ you.
Plus, you did not put your definition in your Authors Notes, provided you recieved one.
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I really have no idea what you are talking about. No one tells Count Orlok what to do or what not to do. You can shove your contest you know where.
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WOW......
THIS IS FUCKIN HOT!
O.O
I LOVE IT! ADORE IT! The lust for blood.....just.....absolutely stunning and well portrayed.
kudos
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I would love to drink your blood.
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Dude......i would SERIOUSLY let someone do that too
^_^
I'm pretty fuckin twisted. haha
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