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Girl

She's blurred a bit

'Round the edges

But in my head

She's crystal clear

Bright eyes

Bright blue eyes

I'd call her cute

If anything

And rare as it seems

Real

A real smile

The kind with something

Other than joy behind it

Looks a little like love

And big, dark circles

Painted on

A pretty face

With too much put-on

Vertigo, darling

She's a swirl girl

Blurring, spinning, swirling

Girl

And she's a pure girl

Young

Clean

Innocent

Girl

Look in her eyes like a lover

But the look's meant

For no one

Wild girl

Feral

Born of a domestic

Now untamable

And all the better for it

Something's caught

Her

Eye

Doesn't seem too hard

And she's a dead girl

Face-down on the floor

Eyes wide

Lips parted

Dead

Girl

And she's that girl

And she's a dream girl

Soft eyes closed

Lips curved

And dreams whisper across her lids

Dream

Girl

And she's a dual girl

She's more than you know

More then she'll tell

And everything you want

Even if you're only seeing half

Of this

Dual

Girl

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Lucious

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  • g r e y i s m gold member
    February 15
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    interesting piece. thanks for entering.