Her barks
are like Lego bricks
easy to put on,
one and then another fitting...
That's a dog's job
to wall off every coyote
they break a few bricks
with their scarier howls
but can't cut faster
through the doorway of defense.
It takes so long and slow
her house is never quite built
until her death of accomplishment
if it doesn't get busted early
by a different energy
springing from type of food.
In a list
A contest entry
- What You Want by Cerbie20.
380 points, ended January 18, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what does this provoke?
Comments
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this one is good. i could imagen a lot of what was said, like the lego part, that was really good.
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i'm glad the part that was the inspiration was the strongest for you, and yet I felt I had to continue it to finish the poem! i guess, if you're not an expert to hold the idea manually, it sometimes can fail.
thank you for seeing my happiness,
daisy
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