Walking down the street,
Not caring about the cars.
They can't see me anyways,
Not being seen is my power.
Sitting on the highway,
Who gives a fuck anyway.
I'm not an important person,
Just another lost soul.
The life I led was pathetic,
Now I'm not there so I do as I please.
invisible you believe?
Nope.
Just Dead.
Author notes
I was think about this is the car so I just typed and this came out.
Any title suggestions??
A contest entry
- Anything Dark by satan-.
460 points, ended March 2, 2008, 75 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Honestly?
Comments
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Conveys the message very nicely, and artistically done too
thanks for entering
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thank you for your entry it's beautiful and I would love to be your niece don't worry about one word x
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Wow, This is very good for a poem made up in a car lol this was a very nice write i like this as i like all of them but this one has some edge to it keep it up.
Sai
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wow. this was... amazing. awesomely done, written, and it realy gets the message across in just a few words.
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