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The Mover and the Deep


By power unfathomed
He stirs the deep
of oceans to storm

And hearts
by varied capacities
in love do stir
upon other waters.

The single splitting hair
does not find
its root
unnoticed
as we in oblivion
fill our days with semi-bold
Hamiltonians
to describe His varied waves

And our varied
waves of ecstatic worship or denial
which He orchestrates
like contrasts on the artist’s
page.

Heavy thought!
how divided moments
do not retreat
as moments
and taken in some boundary
find sequence
consistent
in varied
minds!

I wished to be a grand theme
but did not set the stars
in motion
nor contain the
power
for such universal image.

Then I wish to live on waters
and filled with
deep waters
do stir, storm and love.

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  • Talking Toni gold member
    July 6, 2008

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    Food For Thought............

    was this piece...You gave me alot to think about in your entry here. A whole different way of looking at this picture prompt..nice job...and thanks for your entry, best of luck in my contest!!!~~Toni~~