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on my gravel road

when i cry,
what makes you think
i cry for you?
While i lay here dying
you claim it was your fault..
to say the truth
u ain't that special.
i did as i did
for me and me alone
you were just another
piece of dirt
on my gravel road.
but you say you love me
and i just don't care.
i am over
your dim-witted ways,
so please
just leave
you ain't that special
to me
you were just another
piece of dirt
on my gravel road

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people need to get over them self.... if i say we are through.... dont tell me you love me cause i know it aint the truth...

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  • Kelli Marie
    January 17, 2008

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    This is very good except for that chat type...u, and the lower case i's. You have a treasure here that can be presented so much more like a golden piece of poetry. I enjoyed the read.
    Kelli