Behold the essence of the unknown,
all authority and order thrown out,
maybe we will never know
a luminous fate.
Author notes
Ah. 20 words. My worst paritcular area. But I managed! Haha
A contest entry
- DFI Round 2 ~ Short and Sweet by And Hyetal.
800 points, ended February 5, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Tell me what you think please! Does this make sense to you all?
Comments
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you did an excellent job if this is your worst particular area...it flows well....well done...
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I love everything about this!
The connection between title and poem was perfect! Great job!
Imagery: 1 point
Theme: 1 point
Use of Form/Flow: 1 point
Other criteria: 1 point
Overall Appeal: 1 point
5 points for Team Sonneteer!
Always,
Cassie
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This was an interesting set of words..20 I see. Not as easy a task as people would think. To get profound meaning in just a few words. Good job.
Kelli
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