Have you ever really been in love?
Your heart soars with the clouds above
Can he really be the one?
He's the stars, the moon, & the sun
A love so pure & true
Is knowing the real meaning of "I love you"
A love so honest & real
Is always knowing what the other may feel
A love so very strong
Is being confident
Knowing where you belong
Do you know who you really are?
Of course you don't
You little lonely star
But soon you will find your love song
You will discover where you belong
Author notes
lyric originally written: May 21, 1999
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- A 'Simple' Question: What is Love? by Cyclical.
450 points, ended January 20, 2008, 32 entries
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Comments
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Nice ending. You really are emotional writing here. I like that a lot. Thank youfor entering the contest and best of luck to you.
Kahy -
This is really great poem and it is true in a way about love. I hope you do well in my contest and thanks for entering. Love and Peace!
-Jess
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This is wonderful! I had found that, and lost it too, all with in a short time, when he passed on, and yet, I know it was where I belonged, and was ever true, and the most amazing part of it, is I can still feel that love today. You did a great job showing us the "sunny side" of love in this one!
Best of luck to you in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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Aaah...the sunny side of love...the only one that should exist...
You know, its funny, but most MEN call their women the sun, moon, and stars...at least I think...it's funny how you call HIM that...
I especially like that last stanza...I really hope it happens.
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wow
I really like this great job. I think you summed it up beautifully. The middle stanza was definitely my favorite part where you described three different types of love, yet the same one -
Very Good
Very good and this has possibilities and I think the rhyming is very good and it needs to be alittle bit longer for a song possibility.
I hope to read some more of this stuff in the future.
Keep on writing.
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Speachless. Well done. this is a very well written poem with the end jhust being very well written for the who thing. Sums it up nicely. Very well done. I hope that you keep up the great work.
Take care and keep it up.
Emma
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A nice write...Good luck for the contest...Thanks for sharing...Shalom
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