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My Everything

You can read my tears,
Every one has its own story
And you know each one,
Each and every one by heart.
So why don’t I know you?

How can I stand here beside you
And not be moved by you?
You’re the creator of the universe
You’re the savior, a friend,
You are everything.

You know my heart
Each beat keeps me going
Keeps me breathing.
You made this heart beat
So why don’t I thank you?

How can I stand here beside you
And not be moved by you?
You’re the creator of the universe
You’re the savior, a friend,
You are everything.

You feel my hurt
From deep down inside.
Every time it hurts too much
You’re always there to comfort me.
So why don’t I reach up for you?

How can I stand here beside you
And not be moved by you?
You’re the creator of the universe
You’re the savior, a friend,
You are everything.

You know that I love you
Because you love me too.
You’ve read my tears
You’ve carried my pain
So how could I not be moved?

As I stand here beside you
I am ever moved by you.
You’re the creator of the universe
You’re my savior, my friend,
You are my everything.

Author notes

Option 3

I have been reflecting on everything God has done for me, and all because of his love. I was amazed at how he is with me yet, I am never moved by him, how he is always with you, but some people never seem to be awed by it, it's sad but amazing because he loves them just the same.

Props to the song "Everything" by Lifehouse which gave me the inspiration for this.

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  • who iam
    July 28

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    Soulfully Great

    God is always with us.After all we were destined at birth to serve a purpose in this life.Several of my writings address this issue,as I too am like you,
    Proud to be a Christian,and truly blessed by Him.
    Continue following His Way and the eventual rewards will follow.Questions and answers are always asked and answered in His own time.
    God Bless


  • walkingstick98
    June 20
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    I think that everyone is moved by God at some point but everyone isn't going to accept that it's coming from God. To know him is to love him and appreciate him. I thank you for sharing this with me we should often reflect on where he has taken us and where we are now. Amazing that we are still here. Good luck in the contest

  • Cocfm
    June 10

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    A very deep reflection on everything. Praise God for this write. I really loved how you allowed your words to flow from your soul.

    God bless you.

  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    June 7

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    Deep, philosophical piece this is. People should always ask questions and be inquistive of God. For it is with questions that we will eventually get answers. I am not a church goer. I used to be, but I am not. But I do believe in God, in a Creator, much as I believe in the Devil.

    I believe that both of them are always with us. Always by our side. Never leaving us. Your piece is thought-provoking too and makes one think so very much. You have written a very beautiful and emotional piece here.

    With
    Dark
    Love
    Wayne Leon
    x


  • desperate-addict
    May 18
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    wow... Very deep writting. Makes me want to get saved

  • brightsmylesxx
    May 17

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    Beautiful.

    This is such an awesome reflection on how awesome God really is. It is just truely beautiful. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem!

    Keep on writing,
    ~ Bright Smyles

  • Itahed
    May 13
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    Wow

    This is beautiful! i love this piece I am so glad that i came on to your page BEAUTIFUL.

  • TheGreatestLove
    March 25

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    I could picture this as a song, because it had a good flow..

    It's great to know that you have realised that God is indeed "Your Everything".

    A beautiful write, thank you for sharing


  • Noah20Tymatal
    February 20

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    AWESOME WRITE

    Great queries we should always be asking. Why have we done what we did after all he has done for us? I really like the path you chose for your poem and the tenderness your heart portrayed in the end. "As I stand be beside you i am ever moved by you. You're the creator of the universe your my saviour, my friend, you are my everything.". Awesome really Awesome. Thank you for sharing your heart and fine poetry.


  • fromtheheart1409
    February 14
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    BEAUTIFUL

    This is AWESOME! It was so beautiful! I love the chorus, especially how the line "Your are everything" transformed into "Your are my everything" in the very last stanza!

    "How can I stand here beside you
    And not be moved by you?"
    That's deep and thought provoking! This in and amazing and beautiful pieces! God bless you!

    Luv ya oodles!
    Courtney


  • thelordreigns gold member
    February 8

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    He is our everything. I pray that you will touch Him, reach Him, thank Him, and devote your life to Him. This is a beautifully crafted poem. Thanks so much for entering our contest.

    - joanne

  • daviscth gold member
    January 18

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    This is beautiful darling. Your faith inspires me each time you write about God. I loved this!!!! Your words are so true and down to earth.


  • Rose Angel gold member
    January 17

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    How we should all ask ourselves this question that are near to God...His character is fathomless, wisdom, everything....When we go to heaven there are so many questions we will want to ask..You have covered personally, how we take Him for granted, and this is from the heart.....From the heart of a teenage girl who loves her Lord with all her heart....Very heart moving....and beautiful dear niece!

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