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Nice to meet you.

A Boy
I once was scared, to start again,
Because of lies, and decceitful friends.

There's few of these
In this world, that make it easier to accept,
that some human nature, Is just wrong assumptions.

Just a Guy
Whom I met, he makes me smile,
Friendship, I question....

It should last a while.

A Human
Never seen his smile, let alone his face.
A kind hearted nature, how lucky am I.
I think I'm lucky this time.
Hes a sweet young guy.

We
Have few, yet many things in common,
I hope we can learn to share a smile.
Share a hug.
Understand a style.
A future friend.
I believe thats true.
But for now,
It's very nice to meet you!

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  • Tercil gold member
    March 8, 2008

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    It all starts again, the very words, which to all said and done will decide later, that seeing them for te first time was equally as lovely as the next. So much generalisation in here which lets us all have a feel of this scenario. nice job.


  • Old Fool
    February 29, 2008

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    Good... no,... Better...

    Higging you, specially in your dark times..
    Always with you, my darling xx Evert


  • Jiraiya13
    January 18, 2008
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    thank you for this wonderful read it is beautiful. i am honoured to read this!


  • Lancashire Lad
    January 18, 2008
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    mint

    its a gd poem so it is i like the way u describe ya feelings


  • Flightless Raven
    January 18, 2008

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    wow

    you actually seem to be growing now as a poet, and as a person... this has a charm, a certain rythm to it that is unlike most of your other poetry iv´e read...quite enjoyable


  • Rendered Old
    January 17, 2008

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    Hmm, I like this one
    So very optimistic in the end, looking forward to a new friend.. a new person..
    An interesting style too..
    Easy to read, yet different..
    I like
    More please
    All my Love Hugz xx Evert

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