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Afflicted

Complex curtains
Darken my mind
Codes-
Like a matrix

A struggle
Behind
Light green eyes
To be at peace
With the past…

This heart of mine
Bleeds
The death of innocence
Pump by pump
It weeps

I remain
Blind
Of my beauty,
My ugliness…

My addiction

Living
(But not breathing)
Feeling
(Without touch)
Adapting
(As humans do)


Full
Of love,
Yet
Unable to…

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  • N e a r
    January 27, 2008

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    Complex and emotional, you write your words with a passion and with such intensity. Great write.

    Thanks for entering your write at A N Y T H I N G ~ G O E S ! Good luck!



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  • Kelli Marie
    January 17, 2008

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    Love it!! This is really very good. You did a great job of introducing yourself to me, thank you. You have a great talent.
    Kelli