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Inamorata

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that...she is

will make the strongest man,

break down in tears

dangerous curves

cool

as a whip

I get turned on,

by this thing she does with her hips

sweet, lustful desires

 could make a blind man see

and the innocent one's...become liars

boi, does she set my Soul on fire

My

Inamorata

makes my nature rise higher

All I want is one night

I know she is feeling me

even though she puts up a fight

The moment she walks in

I drop everything and stare

My lover

will meet my

Anywhere

Right then, I am turned on

while I sit at the bar,

until everyone else is gone

This Thichic

drives me insane

making love to her

is no longer a game

The way she

licks her lips

sweet as chocolate

my honey dip

This was a story once told to me

look in my eyes

now you tell me,

what do you see?

 

 

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It's funny when you can read another person's thoughts, and they are Xrated (lol)

Inamorata..."female lover"
Now ain't that sumthin

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  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    January 21, 2008

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    Wowowowwow....this has such a great flow...it really had me going and longing for my own inamorata...well longing and going in more way's than just one

    Loved it...
    XXJeannette


    • Ephiphany
      January 21, 2008
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      Thank you Beauty

      always appreciate you.
      ephiphany♥

  • wendymolly
    January 20, 2008
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    this leaps right into the soul of anyone! great thoughts to feel with this one!


  • Sandygram
    January 19, 2008

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    Good morning dear niece, You aLways write such fantastic poetry. I love how you started this poem. Really adds to its beauty. Your talent shines through in this. Excellent write!! A pleasure to read. Aunt Sandy


    • Ephiphany
      January 19, 2008
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      good morning Auntie Sandy

      thanks for your comment on this, I am truly grateful.
      ephiphany♥


  • lostangel07
    January 18, 2008

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    absolutly bloody fantastic! I love it!!!1 hehe. Ive always loved the word inamorata...its in my myspace url But what an awesome poem! *dances*

    • Ephiphany
      January 18, 2008
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      lol

      thanks angel so glad you are supportive of the inamorata's Thanks, I appreciate your comment on this.

      ephiphany♥


  • MahoganyFlow
    January 18, 2008
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    ......


  • LovetimesLove
    January 18, 2008
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    that's some feline. meeeoow Great write!


    • Ephiphany
      January 18, 2008
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      Thanks Love

      I always appreciate your comments

      ephiphany♥


  • Mykeee
    January 17, 2008

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    Where can I find me una Inamorata? Nice perspective in the eyes of a lustful man. And how lustful we can be. But a secret ladies do there thing as well Nice touch.

    • Ephiphany
      January 17, 2008
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      LOL

      you a trip where can you find you a Inamorata?
      hmmm...let's see, well I do have one person in mind, but you have to be gentle

      Just kidding...thanks for the comment
      Michael
      CC♥


  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    January 17, 2008

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    ooooh sisssy that's hot lol

    only thing i didn't like was "boi" i found the spelling distracting. thicchic too, but i know that's your thang so that one is cool [hehe im a thickchick too]

    this is sexy for sure sis i enjoyed reading this alot.

    love ya!

    Tasha

    • Ephiphany
      January 17, 2008
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      Love you too sissy poo

      and thanks for reading this, I have some naughty men in this office undercover that is
      just thought I would call this one out
      Piff


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    January 17, 2008

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    Deep Seductive and Sensual.

    This is just great writing. Imagery is indeed x rated.Hahahah. I have to agree with the previous comment in that it is very erotic, seductive almost hypnotizing in the way the words form and drop. Wonderful writing here.

    Well done Piff

    Wayne Leon
    xx

    • Ephiphany
      January 17, 2008
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      Whats up handsome?

      Thanks for reading this, I promise to return the favor, you and I have been missin one another, but I know we will always come back

      Thanks my dear Wayne
      Piff♥


  • onesugar gold member
    January 17, 2008

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    I've written from other genders point of view before

    Love this sis now I'm feeling a little naughty DAMN! LOL!!!

    Oh to be a mind reader

    Wicked lil sis

    ~sugarcookie~

    • Ephiphany
      January 17, 2008
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      tehee

      I am so glad you are keeping up with these activities...sumbody keeps forgin me name around here don't worry sis, I will catch the culprit soon oops...wrong face, I meant


  • HaleyMary
    January 17, 2008

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    This is fantastic, Sis. Seemed to be written from the opposite gender's point of view. You did well with this piece. Very erotic imagery and still very sensual. Keep writing.

    • Ephiphany
      January 17, 2008
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      Yes this was from another view sis. Great job on identfying that
      This guy in my office found out that I wrote Erotic and Romantic Poetry, well he wanted to test me one day and I basically read his mind from his actions and looks whenever I walked by....naughty man actually he was suprised at the response, because most of the time I am very quiet. I let him read this today, and he thought it was hilarious , and I did too.

      Ephiphany♥

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