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Fretting......

Fretting is what I do
Im soaked in my sorrow
Only because I love her
She is confused
But somewhere underneath it all
I know she feels it too
endless nights, more endless nights
thinking about the future and what it holds
thinking of many of the scenerios
if only she would love me like i love her
drifting further and further away
shes what i think about everyday
Until she finds her own way
For her I will pray
To be strong and to carry on

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  • Andi. gold member
    January 31, 2008
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    another great write Jish.
    sorry ur goin thru this.
    well done ♥ Dina


  • XxKillerxXLettexX
    January 21, 2008

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    Great write. I like this and yet, it is sooo sad. I am sorry that you have to go through this pain because I also know what it is like to deal with this sort of thing.