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I'm No Trophy

Don't touch me like I'm yours.
Do you think I care
For your games of perfection?
Perhaps its reflection of myself
That makes me hate you.

Don't touch me like I'm yours.
Did you honestly believe
That I would parade for your friends,
Like its all ends and not means,
Be a "trophy" that you've won?

Here come the lies,
The apologies,
The hurried explanations.

Amazingly enough, I don't give a shit.

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  • Cat
    January 18, 2008

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    i love the title of this- it sets the tone- lol..not sure the fuck off works.. - but im not sure it doesnt.. thanks for entering

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    • a-face-in-the-crowd
      January 18, 2008
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      thanks.
      i wasnt sure about the fuck off either so thanks for the criticism - i'm now thinking about taking that out!


  • tarcus
    January 17, 2008

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    My but you have moved on the style is well rehearsed but the wording is far superior.
    Keep at it