No more
Mrs. Nice
and I don't care
if you prefer
potato or rice
I don't need any of
your advice
Think I'll have a
Vodka over ice
I've tried everything
but nothing
will suffice
So now
it's
no more Mrs. Nice.
Say! that's good
over ice
(maybe just one more
with a lemon slice)
As I was saying;
no more Mrs. Nice.
(Maybe I should
add a little more ice)
Did you say
"potato" or "rice"?
Really, I don't care
Fix your own dinner!
dear.
A contest entry
- image inspired - 4 hours by Cat.
500 points, ended January 18, 2008, 6 entries
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Comments
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nice, rice, advice, ice, suffice, slice..
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I love this piece- it is really really creative and fun- of course i can't consider it for a trophy- because of the end line rhyme.. but who cares.. this is great!
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Thank you. I didn't realize that I rhymed the end line. Oh, well.
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