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Quiet



I wore bruises
under my bra
and shorts
blooming between
the maroon lines
that skipped in ribbons
across my thighs.




[you can't stand the sight of me,














                        but you never look away]



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  • InMyFlames
    January 22, 2008

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    whoa whoa and whoa this is so moving its short but SO SO MOVING, I love this well done, i cant be critical of one thing!!!