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Waiting

Another day alone,
Well not alone, just without you
I thought you’d be here
But I guess you lied, or found something better to do
You could’ve called
You know I’d have understood
But you left me waiting
Longer than I thought I could
What happened?
Did you just forget I asked?
That’s really nice to know
That you could just forget me that fast
All I wanted
Was a day for us to spend together
But instead I was here
Alone, waiting for what seemed like forever
That’s okay though
At least you probably had plenty of fun
I was here grounded
Waiting until the day was done
No, I didn’t cry
Or get angry, though I did get awful close
But what do you expect
I’m not as patient as most
But I’ll keep on waiting
For the day you come around
Maybe then, you’ll find you love me
Either that or stop letting me down

Copyright ©2007 Ashley Leanne Prince

Author notes

This is the poem that broke through my barrier of writersblock. It is copyrighted in my name and due to be published in a book of poetry.

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Sorry!!! Its a prewrite and I forgot to edit the Notes!

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Comments

  • Hey there, lovely poem and this one hits me close to home...

    I checked out your page and your first poem posted was "I'm not Invisble"

    In any way, I enjoyed this read!

    All the best.

  • PhantomsAngel87 Greeters member
    January 29

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    Congratulations on being published in a book of poetry A very nice honour.

    Great write

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  • lyme disease
    January 24

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    no punctuation...referring to the end of every line..
    not that it's a bad thing, it was written that way..
    could symbolize a lot of emotions...
    for one, being ever hopeful coinciding with the write altogether