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Have you ever
grappled so hard for a truth
you broke the skin
and tore away the lining
connecting you to sanity?

A contest entry

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  • Exodus gold member
    January 18, 2008
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    Yay
    You still haven't lost your touch. This was excellent hun


  • AlwaysbeBIG
    January 17, 2008

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    This was very good...I liked it a lot

    I think the last two lines were my favorite...

    Thanks for entering, and good luck


    Brandon


  • Eyes Wide Shut gold member
    January 17, 2008
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    oh! this is really good. I loved the second line. Good luck in the contest. Keep up the good work.