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Stars Came Falling

Tracing your lips
Feeling your breath

As I turn it over in my mind

The black night canopy
The silence of my heart

We're running out of time

And I am waiting
Waiting for her cry
Listening for the calling
Lost in night,

the stars came falling

Galactic distances
And light years away
Crying desperately
I wait for the day

It's her call
It's your turn
Will your diamond in the sky burn?

The void of space
The stretch of time
Caught me bawling
And tonight: Revolt!

the stars came falling

The wish of my love
The wish of my life
Down the wishing well
My un-proposed wife

Let us lie under the blanket of heaven
Count it lucky; 13,7

In our sleep
Dreams were crawling
The night we watched

the stars came falling

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  • xxtainted-faeriexx
    January 17, 2008

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    It's her call
    It's your turn
    Will your diamond in the sky burn?

    this poem is beautiful. you have done such a good job iwht the rhyme shceme and the way things flow! i think this is one of the best i have read in a while. and i congradulate you.
    much love
    xoxo
    tainted


    • andywontdie silver member
      January 17, 2008
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      Thank you so very much for your comments! this is a very dear piece to me and i am glad that you could see the beauty in it. steve