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on an acoustic guitar...to the one who played so well.

i watched you from the hallway... i was in another room.

your trickle of imagination began to shift and bloom.

the words that found no tongue or lips did penetrate my mind,

and the song i sang to your acoustic twang was in my head confined.

but something slowly lifted, like the rising of the moon,

and soon i smiled, a girl beguiled by your lovely, haunting tune.

you were sitting in a corner, i was draped about a chair.

if heav'n had looked upon me, perhaps you knew that i was there.

your fingers danced and made me feel how lucky it would be,

were i the strings you played upon, and the song you made was me.

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