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Life through love

Something appearing in my soul
A new emotion

Strange,
Enticing.

Captivating and enthralling
All-consuming

Passions,
Desires?

The need to feel and be felt
To know love

Need,
Want?

The touch of skin against skin
Lethal combination

Lust,
Love?

Love with the passion of the sun
Fire consuming fire

Absolute,
Ephemeral?

Death steals the dearest of loves
Coldest of endings

End,
Beginning?

Author notes

Sometimes it's hard to decide if what you feel is truly what it is. The second half of each stanza is a choice between what it could be, and what it is.
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  • emokittie
    March 12, 2008
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    totally greatnees..
    keep up the good work..


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    January 18, 2008

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    wow, this is deep and it is kind of weird but i think you did a great job on this, keep it flowing my friend, keep it flowing