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If you are with me.....


If you are with me ,my queen,
Like a rocket I reach the moon!
Swim the seven seas of the world,
Write the epic of love on your lips!

I adore your lustrous black hair
With all the stars twinkling ,fair!
Change the whirlwind into cool breeze!
Make your smile moonlight on yourlips!

Sprinkle drops of honey as dew,
Rain the earth with happiness cue!
Make your dreams of loveblossom flowers,
In your colorful life,shower.

In mute I sing songs that echo love,
By touch, play the music of  hearts!
Kiss, caress and embrace shall stand
Supreme in the world of lovers, grand!.


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In love one can do miracles!

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  • Chrysalis
    September 20, 2008

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    You know love all to well.
    For you express it so well also in your poems.
    Excellent write once again.
    thnx so much for the comments.


  • teardrop gold member
    March 8, 2008
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    CEEGEE
    It's been a long time, my friend! It is always good to hear from you as well as know in my heart when I come to your page I am always going to read your words of love. You are such a wonderful person! Seriously, you are! A man with strength for us both. I know that a man of your age, (as mine) you have seen your fair share of hardships in life when your world could get rocky yet, your heart does nothing but blossom with love! Thank you ceegee for being you!

    TD


  • ennovy silver member
    March 1, 2008
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    Reflections of The Romantic Man

    Ahh! how beautiful your words of passion are vividly show how much you love that someone special. You are a romantic person full of emotional desires. Your words speak in silence, yet they are loud for all to hear in this wonderful poem. I loved it!...novy


  • ceegeeess
    February 4, 2008
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    You are like liquid gold running acrossed the strings of my heart. " In the two chmbers of your heart with pureblood, thelove, like a goldsmith of love I mould romantic scenesthat the mind is thirsty of moulding.My words fail me to describe the great complement you have given. Take care,Bye sweet Marlo


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    January 18, 2008

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    What beautiful words of affection spoken to the one you love. Can we really do miracles when we're in love?

    Thank you for sharing your heart and feelings..


    • ceegeeess
      February 4, 2008
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      Can we really do miracles when we're in love?"Every miracle is possible in love. Flesh and blood with no love are objects that are stale and die and dry up as the hands of the watch move ahead! You have reallymade thought provoking doubt. It made me think so much and happy thoughts crowded my mind. Your latest photois wonderfully beautiful. Thank you for your comment


  • WhisperingSpirit silver member
    January 18, 2008

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    Wow this is so beautiful, a wonderful chose of words
    that show passion and great love for another.
    What a pleasant start to my day. Thank you for adding me as a favorite I am honored.


  • raggyann
    January 17, 2008
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    oh this is so beautiful
    the images were warm and tender


  • Desire gold member
    January 17, 2008

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    Precious!!

    Beautifully penned my Friend and love the images also the emotions You have shared from Your Heart~~

    Sprinkle drops of honey as dew,
    Rain the earth with happiness cue!
    Make your dreams of loveblossom flowers,
    In your colorful life,shower.

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~

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