Maleficent feline in dusky rose
Gathered velvet lappes at her breasts
Like blood upon the snow
The calm before the storm
Raped of faith by a jaded kiss
Her weeping soul freed from the abyss
Eager to eclipse the crimson moon
Devoid of all prayers
Save from the vengful cries of dispair
Belonging to the watchful hounds
Risen from the ashes
Beautiful destructor
Goddess of tears and empty wombs
Where heavy frosts have labored long
To bare their constant wounds
Enigmas of shadowy dreams
As the shadows unblinded her eyes to see
Abandoned by paradise
To the dead, dark, and past
She casts her dispersions
On life's brittle glass
A pheonix in heat
Lustful pleasures take flesh
Casting me to the fires
Of my Goddess's breast
Author notes
Written November 11th, 2003
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oh my GODDESS! That is just...omg! i'm lost for words. I LOVE IT! Sings of dispare, yet phenix is a bird that is reborn form it's own ashes. Beautiful. The visual too you embedded within your words paints a picture of your goddess yet leaving just enought room for the read to add in the little details. That is great. wow...i'm breathless by your work. Truly captivating your words have become.
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Very insightful indeed!
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great write Bevinnn, but then again.. what is new?? You told me to look at your new poems youve posted, so i did as i was told. ::smiles slightly:: well none the less, i was pleased withthe outcome of your new posts. and you must keep me informed when you post more. We must have tea some time soon.
~jenna
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