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notice me yet?

Im drunk

im fucked up

im screwed up

im sexed up

im loved up

im messed up

im touched up

im lips up

im teeth out

im fingers all over

im the girl with the problems that everyone wants

im the girl who'll destroy you with every glance every whisper and every touch

ill take everything you are and make it into what you always were 
im no good for you baby, im just no good.

But you'll still want me.

even after everything ive done and everything ill do.

Love my hurt.

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i think i was REALLY drunk when i wrote this..
REALLY drunk.
i typed it into my phone...
hahaha you guys should see how it looks.
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  • Allure of a Rose
    January 26, 2008

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    I was a .teensy. bit bored at first but it really bloomed out.
    I especially loved:

    "I'm teeth out
    I'm fingers all over"

    Both of those sounded a lot like me. xD
    I love it bby.


    I know exactly how it is to wake up with your headache and be messing with your phone, and find a whole bunch of words typed into it in a note or something.

    Ah, and I love your hat [in your DisplayPic].


    -YourSlutPrincess-


  • girl shaman
    January 17, 2008

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    i love you crash babes; and i do love your hurt; but not in a way where i don't feel it b/c i do feel it. your my kii.kii im so glad to see something from you! i know your really busy now a days so i misses you lots come back soon! muah

    ♥


    • Crash Into Me
      January 17, 2008
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      gah,,
      i miss you more,

      hhehehe kii kii??
      well it sounds cute.
      thank you babes. im adding more soon.
      and ill try to get on more just for you.
      :]
      ♥ ♥ ♥
      [[your kii kii]]


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    January 17, 2008

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    hehe some good stuff comes out when you're drunk then, I loved this one. I loved the use of changing colours, fonts and sizes to make an impact and it was just raw. I know a guy who is kind of the same with me, so I can relate as well. Nicely done


    • Crash Into Me
      January 17, 2008
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      hahaha well that's good to know.
      ill keep that in mind
      Drunk Alexsis=Good writing.

      thanks dolly,
      ♥ ♥
      [[alexsis]]


  • xNeonVertigoLipsx
    January 17, 2008

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    I think this rules!

    absolutely wonderfull..... very powerfull, and you definately put your point across.....that you are awesome. one of my fav parts is.....love my hurt.... that topped it all off beautifully babe. xXx

    • Crash Into Me
      January 17, 2008
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      awww. thanks suga doll.
      :]
      i miss your comments.
      ♥ ♥
      [[alexsis]]

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