Mute in this vast ocean of deformed faces and starring eyes
I look up and force a smile while they point and tell lies
Praying each night for the sun to never again rise
Remembering the pain I must face just to be wise
Laughing and whispering to show their superiority from me
Hands pushing and grabbing making me crash for all to see
A few walk up to reach out their hand as a hi is said
Their faces unchanged from the infection cruelty spreads
We remain together smiling and laughing back you see
The tables turned now that we are more of a demon than thee
Your frightning faces and disgusted lies we no longer endure
Pain turned into pleasure as we smile at you for more
Now we rise above the rain and the pain to a new day
Saying goodbye to it all is no longer the only way.
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Interesting, I can relate to your piece. It took opn a different meaning for me as in how to interact with people.
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I liked it a lot. Agree with the other poster....those first 2 lines are a GREAT opening!!!
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Mute in this vast ocean of deformed faces and starring eyes
I look up and force a smile while they point and tell lies
the first to lines are the best in my opinion they give an excellent opening -
Liked the way these rhyming couplets all fit together to form the final poem. Good flow, rhythm and rhyme with a strong message sent in these lines. Great concluding two lines as well.
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This is how you have defined this life which Iis so profund beauty of life and so truthful manner of this life.your flow is wonderful and your impact too is the strength of this amzing poetry..I love this piece and I love the way you have summed it up with a final note in the last two lines..a wonderful write indeed..
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