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Rat Race

Places to go,
people to be.
Try to break free.

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clear enough? [I'm sometimes obtuse]

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  • twelfthknight silver member
    May 5, 2009
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    i like your message i like the "people to be" very apt lol

  • SimplySonnets gold member
    April 1, 2009
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    It appeals to the anarchist in me.

    Always the rebel, liked your message, good write.

  • boilerjim
    February 13, 2008
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    Thanks

    I had not read "If" it was incredible. I really enjoy short but meaningful poetry. Thanks for the thoughts and words.

  • boilerjim
    January 22, 2008

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    Contradictoraly precise

    I have to fight it every moment of my existence. I don't mind because I have everything that my heart desires, doing it from my perch, with my God, and an unfaltering cast of acceptors. Thanks for the thoughts and words.