dedicated my eternity in your wait,
so long, perpetual, distressing,
each second of torture, solitude,
heart discouraged, but, confident,
cultivating lonely everlasting love
in sublime form of immortalizing,
looked for image in faces without color
through so many veins in search of blood,
nothing satisfies, never find you,
wait in despair...
in lonely nights,
no mortal brings your flame,
none has all that fascination,
peace of moonlight for sweet soul,
come across a cutting absence,
blood tears my chest,
still addicted of your blood taste,
even chill body shelters distant heat
in immortality, want death like refuge,
foolish wish, vile dreams, live on uncertainties,
when souls prospecting, extinguishing innocent lives,
follow in search for constant thirst
for centuries and centuries,
will surpass the darkness
in love, a strength, a light, rescues me,
certainty of a valid reason, that
my love never was in vain...
A contest entry
- Blood And Guts by CherryOnTop.
1200 points, ended January 20, 2008, 23 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Fantasy!! by TwiztidMaggot.
600 points, ended January 20, 2008, 26 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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not bad not bad at all
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very interesting. Nice work. Best of luck in both contests. Keep up your good work. it was... yeah... just interesting... hah. ilike it though.
Crimson -
Good luck and thanks for entering my contest.
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Great piece...an enjoyable read, well written. Best of luck in the contest with it
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