love is like the plans of nature
sometimes crashes down
love is like a flame with
fiery passion's burning bright
love is like a tidal wave
as they rise up with hope
and fall back to the sea
A contest entry
- A 'Simple' Question: What is Love? by Cyclical.
450 points, ended January 20, 2008, 32 entries
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Commentary Critique
The approach is well worth reading more into when there is no more to read. But in your second line, I believe that if you were to say 'crashing down', the flow would be all the more smoother to the reading audiences' pallet
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