If I asked you to touch me here would you?
If I begged your lips to my skin
would you leave me craving or satisfy such
fiercely burning needs.
Could you endure, simply adore.
When I stand in virgin white lace,
hiding less than revealing.
Tonight I am control.
I will take us on a ride, binding your hands
And stripping you.
Skin to skin, your flesh to my flesh,
the only way to be.
I dream of touching you there and everywhere
my lips spend sleepless and sleeping nights
trailing paths across your wanton body,
I can be as marble, whilst my Aphrodite stands
nakedly concealed in virgin lace.
Tonight I yield control
To ride with you, Bound by you and to you.
Skin to skin, flesh to flesh,
the only way to be.
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A contest entry
- Lick me in the night. by Ho74pp1eP1e.
400 points, ended January 23, 2008, 9 entries
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Love this one
I too am a fan of the more sexual poems. SO much love and feeling in them. "Skin to skin, flesh to flesh, the only way to be." I think so too 
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I love love love erotica, is my fav genre
And yes your right, so much love and feeling
Skin to skin, mmmmmm now im thinking dirty again hahahahaha, thanks SiS
Cindy
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OMG! Hunny that was so sensual.. ok, I lie.. it was hot hot hot
You have such a wonderful sensual side to you that I just know I am going to love reading! I wish I could do these writes... perhaps you will inspire me!
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hehehee, I love my sensual side
And gosh I would love to know I inspired someone to have a go at writing this style its a whole nother world to enjoy
Cin
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Very nice! I like this alot!
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Thank you very much
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..oh..lol something is left...
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Tonight I yield control
To ride with you, Bound by you and to you.
Skin to skin, flesh to flesh,
the only way to be.
so you know how to narrate magic..well described scenario is here..so eternal..and fascinating as well..well done my friend..and thanks for reading and sending your kinds words on my work..
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Thank you kindly..I like to believe I can narrate magic, so having ou confirm it helps
My pleasure for reading your works, I love your writing
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This is lovely and sensual. A very wonderful little ride indeed. Thank you for sharing and good luck.
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So romantic and passionate. You have a flame that burns deeply in your soul.
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Thanks Aunty Jan,, many thanks
Cin
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Skin to skin leads to soul to soul in self forgetfulness. The bliss losts for a while but worth while Cindy. My sweetest kiss to you for writing a lovely poem to arouse dull sences..Thank U dearest
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Thank you brother, your comment so well thought out, encouraging and much appreciated
Cin
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This is so filled with sensual images; it's wonderful and brings so many gorgeously erotic and just plain sexy thoughts to mind. You really are so good at this style of writing.
Always
Mum
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thanks Mum you flatter and inspire me with your comments
Cin
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