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A tree and a conscience

 

 

                                                 

 

alone it stands, gnarled by age its branches,

or does it know the secrets of dark,

deeper than the darkest depth of night?

the deeds of your hands unkind-

-the thoughts of your tormented soul-

 

or is it your conscience

the whispers you hear from within,

buried in the long ago past,

yet tormenting your present

and holding at bay, the future?

 

is it beckoning in gentle,

to approach

the shelter of its leaves;

to sit against its trunk

-its strength through the ages-

offering redemption , an invitation to speak

of that forever darkness, that holds you hostage

-that conscience-that turmoil-

 

delusional perception of a soul sold for a dime;

-seen in the innocence of a lone tree-

 

 

 

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  • frownsnfreckles
    April 6, 2008

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    'or does it know the secret of dark'
    I do like this line with regard to a troubled concience it presents a strong abstract image.The personification is very interesting with regard to the images. I love your page by the way, beautiful and very interesting, your pets made me smile


  • Gypsie Ink
    January 18, 2008

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    Powerful!

    "the deeds of your hands unkind-" we have so much to be accountable for...Thank you for your entry.

    • cherche -d -ame
      January 18, 2008
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      I tried to add three stars to the two of your comment [as in applauding the contest-for that can no longer be done] and now it seems I can not do do this either. So I will just say thank you for comment and thank you for hosting,
      reenie


  • JohnnyD gold member
    January 17, 2008

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    smiling....actually, few realize that the past is as uncertain as the future, believe it or not. NO, it's not crazy, its true, the past is colored by varying perceptions by numerous individuals and the 'truth' of the event is skewed by their belief's they hold at a future date. Know why regardless of whether we 'visualize' a million different possible scenarios for an outcome in the future that it's almost always different and does not fit one of those scenarios? Because, we each, or as a group reduce the 'future' to the lowest common denominator of perceived 'possibilities'. and as such the complexity factor never comes near to approaching true reality, because simply observing, or thinking of the past or present changes it. You touched on a very profound issue, a problem of which the explanation of once incorporated into economic theory won the Nobel prize two or three years back.

    but, on a more personal level I hope your life is resolving itself based on existing circumstances.

    I shall enjoy chatting with you once again down the road.





    Len

  • Liquid memories
    January 17, 2008

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    awwwwwwwwww

    aww mon cher ami. vous avez écrit avec les sentiments profonds de l'arbre et de la conscience et vous êtes mélangés avec l'amour. aimé l'écoulement et la voie vous l'avez écrit.
    un artiste, un ami vous êtes tous les deux et florissant comme les fleurs de printemps. toujours me donne le plaisir de vous lire.
    le mai votre jour être plaisant
    le travail social écrit de l'amour.
    merci beaucoup,

    Jules

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