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Little Chubby Me

I see him the chubby little boy picking his nose
The kid in the class whering 3 generations past clothes
I cant believe that was me look at that mangey hair
In Jr high already with out a single care
resting his head on his desk begining to snore
This class was just another depressing bore
I shake my head i couldent believe my eyes
Something like this helps you really realize
all the potential i had but i spent it all asleep
If i only knew then all the benifits i could reep
after class a few boys stop him as he roams the hall
Pushing chubby little me into a concrete wall
They knew i had nothing to give them no money
they just wanted to pick on me cause it was funny
These guys were bigger and some real mean dudes
they would hit me and call me names like man boobs
Lunch time comes around and he was waiting in line
His favorite part of the day to just sit and dine.
Then he saw her the prettiest girl in he had ever seen
She was already on her way to becomming a beauty queen
But thats all he ever did was just look and speak few words
If only he had more courage he wouldent seem like a bag of turds
The Bell rings another long day at school
I come and wait outside for the fat little fool
I see him walking towards the street
I say hey wait there kid we need to speak
You dont know me but i know you very well
If you keep this up your next few years will be a hell
First off stay awake in class its important to learn
Homework is for your sake not something you take home and burn
And boy oh boy do some pushups and grow a back-bone
or boys like those will never leave you alone
I know you are self consicene you dont have to lie
But you wont get that girls attention if you dont try.
Dont try to be like the others with all their silly trends
Just remember who you are and stay with your real friends
Remember that kid and you will turn out just fine
I left him there now i just have to figure how to get out of 1999

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  • BluesMan gold member
    February 15, 2008
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    The first twenty four lines werea dredging up of unpleasant memories and then you folled the prompt you could have done a lot more with this write if you would have kept it in the perspective of speaking to yourself. You should also thik about breaking up


  • LovesLostLiterature
    January 19, 2008

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    Great Job

    Very creative! I liked it alot you are a poet that dosnt write about wateveryone elese does you right about wat you feel!


  • pappacass
    January 19, 2008

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    this was great

    i know all to well...i guess i just learned to laugh at myself...lol it's all good though..it makes us the men we are today...awsome message too