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summer

Theres nothing so soothing
To the senses of man
As the singing of birds
As only they can
The rustling of trees
In a summer breeze
The aroma of hay
In the heat of the day
The lyrical sound
Of a babbling brook
And moments to spare
To read a good book.

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  • sora.
    September 13, 2008
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    this is beautiful!
    but unfortunately has already won a gold trophy in another contest...
    >_<

    thankyou anyway.


  • sinner-
    September 12, 2008
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    I like the way you toyed with the senses.well done

    • judmc
      September 12, 2008
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      Pisces rainbow

      Mny Thanks for your kind comments on "A Soldier"
      so glad you liked it Best Wishes George !!!

    • judmc
      September 12, 2008
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      Loveandblessings2u

      After reading "Autumn Leaves" twice did you like it?
      Comment appreciated Best Wishes George

    • judmc
      September 12, 2008
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      sinner

      Many Thanks for your kind comments on "Summer"
      Best Wishes George ++++


  • hugs and kissies
    July 6, 2008

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    Theres nothing so soothing
    To the senses of man
    As the singing of birds
    As only they can
    The rustling of trees
    In a summer breeze

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