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~Pain Tastes The Same~



There are fingers that caress
fallacies of man-maker blades;
penis extension required.

How accidental birth
can taint pavements,
leave you a shadow
in white-bright world,
and like coffee crème
chocolates, be abhorred.

Syllables of slaughter
cut with calm precision,
ruthless candour buries
points beyond redemption,
but pain isn’t colour conscience
and screams taste the same
in the night.

Kith and kin, we all grow
in times field,

yet I wonder,
who carries the greater stigmata.


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  • daviscth silver member
    March 4, 2008
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    The last 2 lines really summed this up for me.


  • Naridill
    January 24, 2008

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    Strong point - enriched and phrased with powerful captions that are more than memorable and needed in turn to learn.

    Thanks for entering,


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    January 17, 2008

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    "taint pavements", "white-bright world" Excellent turns of phrase in this.
    A hard hitter.
    Best of luck in this contest. Be well. ~Pamela