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In Spectre.

Only those inside the walls,
only those who've heard the calls,
slip with ease the evil falls,
safe inside the golden halls.

Only those who kneel and pray,
only those shall see the day,
we shall die when skies they grey,
burn the souls that would not pay.

Only those he shall recieve,
only those that did deceive,
we shall die and none shall grieve,
Holy ghosts that cut and cleave.

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  • chasing rainbows
    April 30, 2008

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    You know what I'm going to say.
    So I don't need to say it.
    But I will.
    This is amazing.

    [stay sick']
    xx Sin


  • anaisnais
    February 8, 2008

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    An interesting write, but what do folk have if they lose their hope and promise in faith? Many truths have been told. An unusual view I feel. Great rhyme form.


    • Sean Logue
      February 11, 2008
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      Faith is blind...a crutch to lean on...it's not for me.

      Cheers.


  • ravensgift
    January 25, 2008
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    WooooHoooo, you're back!!!

  • Gott ist tot
    January 18, 2008

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    Haunting piece here. I liked the alliteration and most of the rhyme, 'they grey' sounded a little forced though (sorry in a critical mood tonight)


  • Canis Lupus
    January 17, 2008

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    Wicked...damn true...the point of ocurse! Couldn't agree more I say the ones that do pray are the ones who will cry...when nothing comes from the sky...to save them! but bah, better not dis other's religion too much lol each to their own

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